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I liked this piece quite a bit. It would provide a perfect build into a full song, and I would love to hear this get more piano intensive with the lower, heavier notes. I'm hoping to hear the finished product of this one if you plan to finish it.
Author's Response:
im gonna finish a song ... one of these days lol
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I'm reviewing as I listen, and so far I like it quite a lot. It's dynamic, it's meshing well. At 1:29, the transition could be more solid - it hangs too much, so perhaps a solid and longer fadeout? After that, I like where it goes. I keeps the base tone, but changes it. It keeps it from getting too repetitive, well done.
Nice build-up, and a catchy rhythm, but it starts to show too much repetition, even with the small background changes. Ah, there; at 4:00 you fixed that a bit, and the ending was great, it left off on a different note.
I like this quite a bit, and it is definitely a job well done. Very minor changes should be made, if at all - it works as is. Keep it up.
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Thanks for the review!
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Overall this is a great bit of work. I agree with the comment made about the excessive reverb... possibly only reverb parts instead of all the way throughout? I also think the 1:20 of loop in the beginning was too much. Change it up a bit and keep the listener hooked, or shorten the intro altogether. Too much of this song is looped, but in any case it is far from bad.
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But... and the... he... uh... you know ... the guy, like.. with the face. Pretty much.... mmhmm.
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I really like the guitar from :27 to :41 but it was a bit long, and the abrupt cutoff sort of made me think... umm??? The birds dont work, and it really doesnt mesh overall. The drums into guitar works well, and I love that but try making the guitar a bit shorter and mesh it into another guitar part to keep it going, then transition out of it into a closing drum beat or something. Not too bad... but nothing great. It DOES have potential though. Play with it.
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It was actually impressive. I could really get into it and it flowed well. Simple, but good.
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For just being a jam, it sounded really nice. I'd love to hear something you concentrated to complete. To previous reviewer - I dug deep for ideas, thought long and hard, consulted wise-men, prayed about it, meditated for days and came up with a solution to it being loud. Turn it down. It doesn't cause distortion, clarity is fine.
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It could definitely be longer, and your ending needs work. It doesn't really close the song out, if you don't watch the timer you're expecting more to jump out after a sec. Other than that it sounds nice and works well.
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I liked the beat, the transitions, and the tempo. It meshed together well, and wasn't just a repititious single loop. You changed it up enough to hold interest, and it all worked well. It's stable and would definitely hold up if anyone wanted to add some vocals to it. Good job.
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But lonnnnger please :) Quite nice other than length of the track.
Author's Response:
Ha crap! I replied to osmun12 instead of you haha
well here's the reply for osmun12
I use a PodXT module that is connected directly in my computer :)
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